Ukwakhiwa "ku-Okthoba Emuva" ngesitayela semidwebo-imizwa: izici zesitayela nokwakhiwa kombhalo

Ukwakhiwa kokuthi "I-Autumn ezayo" ngumsebenzi ongakwazi ukubona manje. Kodwa kufanele kube. Ngempela, empeleni, kunoma iyiphi isihloko ungabhala into engavamile, ekhethekile, eyingqayizivele! Ngoba wonke umuntu unendlela yakhe yokucabanga. Futhi sonke siyaqonda iqiniso elizungezile ngezindlela ezahlukene. Futhi lokhu uhlobo oluhlukile. Kubalulekile ukusebenzisa le mfanelo bese uzama ukuveza imizwa yakho ekhethekile ngokuhlukile kwabanye. Kodwa mayelana nakho konke okuhlelekile.

Isingeniso

Yini okufanele kube ukuqala komsebenzi onjenge-sketch? Ukwakhiwa kwesihloko esithi "Ukuvota Kamuva", kunoma yisiphi isitayela ebhaliwe, kunesibopho sokuba nesingeniso. Kulokhu, kubalulekile ukuveza isimo sengqondo kusuka emigqeni yokuqala. Isiqalo esihle singase sibe mayelana nesingeniso esinjalo: "Ukuphela kuka-Okthoba. Ngeke usasethemba ithemba lokufudumala futhi uqale ukuthola ama-sweaters afihliwe ubusika bokugcina. Bayajabula kakhulu ukugoqa ngokwabo ekwindla epholile. Nakuba ngezinye izikhathi ilanga likhanya. Imisebe yakhe yamathambo ikhanyisa emigwaqweni egcwele amaqabunga awile, aboniswa ebusweni be-puddles ... "Lokhu kuzoba yisiqalo esihle somsebenzi onjenge-essay ethi" Ngasekupheleni Kwekwindla. " Ngokushesha, imizwa yomlobi ibonakala, futhi phambi kwamehlo omfundi isithombe sesichazwe esisodwa.

Ingxenye enkulu

Wonke umuntu uyazi ukuthi umsebenzi wokubhala obhaliwe uqukethe izingxenye ezintathu: ukungena, okuqukethwe nokuboshwa. Futhi uma kucacile ekuqaleni, ke yini okumele ibe yingxenye eyinhloko yalo msebenzi, njengokwakhiwa kwesihloko esithi "I-Autumn Late"? Nakhu kuyadingeka ukugcina uhlobo oluthile lokubhala imidwebo-imizwelo. Kubalulekile ukuqhubeka nenhloko yokuzola, incazelo elinganiselwe-ukucabanga, ukusebenzisa izithombe ezihlukahlukene, izifanekiso, ukufanisa. Umfundi, ejwayelene nombhalo, kufanele abe nomuzwa wokuthi kukhona okukhethekile. Njengokungathi akafundeli enye indaba, futhi njengokungathi uhlezi esihlalweni esibhekene nomlobi, ngubani owamtshela indaba ethakazelisayo. Dimly, ngokuningiliziwe, ifilosofi. Umphumela wokuba yilokho okufanele ube khona kulo msebenzi.

Lokhu kungase kubonakale kuyinkimbinkimbi, kodwa kuphela ekuboneni kokuqala. Into ebaluleke kakhulu akuyona ukuyiqeda ngezici zombhalo (inqwaba yezinkulumo zobuciko, izifaniso, ukufanisa, izimpande, njll) kanye nemizwelo. Konke kufanele kube ngokulinganisela. Lona umthetho wegolide wombhalo wombhali.

Okuqukethwe

Emisebenzini enjalo akufanele kube khona ukudluliselwa okomile, noma ngabe yi-landscape eyodwa. Umbhali kufanele azame ukutshela umfundi ukuthi iphunga, umbala, umkhathi. Kodwa ngenxa yalokhu kuyadingeka ukuba ungene ezindabeni zomuntu siqu. Ungabhala into enjengale: "Ukwindla kwasekuseni. Izihlahla zimi. Ehamba ngaleyo ndlela, enezinwele ezinde ezibushelelezi, okungekho-cha, futhi amaqabunga ambalwa amaqabunga azobaleka ngaphambili, okuzophinde awele. Silence ... Akukho cishe emigwaqweni. Lona ngoNovemba. Inyanga ebanda kunazo zonke ekwindla. Ngokuvamile isibhakabhaka sinamanzi ama-leaden, okuvela khona lapho amahlumela ashisa kakhulu aqala ukuwa phansi ngokuzwakala. Futhi wena, uhamba phakathi kwakho konke lokhu, uqala ukwengeza isinyathelo, ubeke phansi ngaphansi kweminye ihlumela elithinta ikhodi lakho. Esikhundleni sekhaya, uye esitokisini esifudumele, ekomitini yetiyi elikhiphayo nge-lemon. I-autumn ... Akuwona wonke umuntu owuthandayo. Futhi ngiphambene nalokho. Kunzima ukungavumelani ukuthi kuzo zonke lokhu kukhona uthando. "

Lesi yisibonelo esicacile somdwebo womlobi. Iyini le nhloko yale ncazelo? Imicabango! Hlala ngokukhanyayo, ngokuthakazelisayo, njalo. Lapha kukhona ukucabanga, incazelo, ukuqhathanisa. Konke okudingekayo kumsebenzi omibalabala. Kulezi zitayela ukuthi ngokuvamile babhala umdwebo wokudweba.

Isiphetho

Ukuqedela kungenye yezinkimbinkimbi kunabo bonke (izingxenye zabamlobi abathile). Ngiqedela kanjani umdwebo on "I-Autumn Yasekuseni Ehlathini"? Ukwakhiwa kungagcwaliswa ngezindlela ezahlukene. Kodwa ngokuqondile imidwebo yombhalo - ngendlela ekhethekile. Ukuqaphela isitayela esivele sijwayele ingxoxo, ingxoxo. Leli qephu elincane, kodwa elikhulu kakhulu, lingase libe yisiphetho esihle: "I-autumn yisikhathi esikhethekile sonyaka. Kungenxa yokuwa ukuthi sibheke ukuzindla okujulile, ukunqoba izinkumbulo, futhi sinethemba. Kungani? Mhlawumbe ngoba imvelo ilele ewa. Futhi kithi, ngokuphambene nalokho, imicabango iyavusa ... "