Indlela yokubhala inkulumo ethi "City My": amathiphu namasu

Inkulumo ethi "Idolobha Lami" ingabhalwa yinoma yimuphi umfundi. Lo msebenzi ulula emvelweni. Umfundi unomsebenzi wokukhuluma ngomuzi wakhe. Imicabango kuphela edingeka ukuthi ichazwe ngendlela ethile nasekhasini. Nokho, emva kokubuka izibonelo ezimbalwa, uzoqonda konke.

Isingeniso

Lena yingxenye yokuqala yimuphi umsebenzi. Ukwakhiwa kwesihloko esithi "Umuzi Wami" akuyona into ehlukile. Ukungena kufanele kube ngosayizi omncane, kodwa ngemva kokufunda wonke umuntu kufanele aqonde ukuthi kuzoxoxwa ngani kamuva. Ungabhala into enjengale: "Ngamunye wethu unendawo yakubo, yindawo lapho umuntu azalwa khona futhi esebenzisa ubuntwana bakhe, futhi ake abantu abaningi bahambe baye eminye imizi ukuze bafune indawo yabo phansi kwelanga, kodwa lapha bahlala njalo Bayojabula ukubuyela emuva, ngoba lapha, ikhaya labo, izinkumbulo futhi, impela, imigwaqo eyaziwa kahle kakhulu. "Ngami, lo ngumuzi wami ozalwa N".

Lesi singeniso senza kucace ukuthi ngaphezulu kombhalo umbhali uzokutshela ukuthi wazalwa kuphi, futhi wabelane ngomzwelo nemizwa yakhe nomfundi. Lokhu kuyokwanela, ngoba isihloko esiyinhloko sizovezwa engxenyeni enkulu.

Okuqukethwe

Ukwakhiwa kwesihloko esithi "Umuzi Wami" kungabhalwa kunoma yikuphi ukhiye. Lesi siqondiso sendaba sinikeza umbhali inkululeko egcwele yokudala. Njengendlela yokukhetha - ukwakheka "I-Autumn edolobheni lami." Kubonakala sengathi: "Ngiyayithanda idolobha lami, lihlala lihle kakhulu, kodwa ngendlela ekhethekile kakhulu le ndawo ibonakala ekwindla." Sinamapaki amaningi, atholakala kahle phakathi kwazo zonke izihlahla zemithi. "Ngo-Okthoba noNovemba kunengqondo yangempela. Amaqabunga egolide, omnsundu, omnyama, omnyama nabomvu, aqala ukuwa, alele ebuthongweni nxazonke, athokoza kakhulu ezinyaweni zakho.Ukuhlala ebhentshini, ungabona ukuthi izihlahla zingakabikho emithini ilanga lekwindla likhanya. Ngiza lapha njalo ngo-Okthoba Ukuqaphela i Lezi zintaba, ngiyaqonda ukuthi kungani izimbongi zazihlabelela ekwindla. "

Ngomoya ofanayo, ungachaza ebusika, entwasahlobo noma ehlobo. Lokhu kushiyelwe ekuqondeni kombhali. Into eyinhloko ukuthi isihloko sagcina siguquliwe.

Isiphetho

Abaningi ezikoleni banombuzo: indlela yokuqedela ukubunjwa ngesihloko esithi "Umuzi Wami"? Yebo, abanye abantu banezinkinga ekuqaleni kwe-essay, kodwa abanye bakhathazekile ngokuphela. Eqinisweni, konke kulula. Kudingekile kuphela ukuhlanganisa konke okungenhla. Into esemqoka ukukwenza ukuze umfundi angabi nomuzwa wokuphelele kombhalo.

Isigaba esibhalwe kulo moya sizoba isiphetho esihle kakhulu enkulumweni: "Cishe wonke umuntu uyayithanda futhi uyakwazisa umuzi wakubo, nakuba abaningi bengakuqondi lokhu ebusheni babo, kodwa babuyela ezweni labo bomhlaba bese belibona. Uma ubona indawo ethile, ukhumbula ngokuzikhandla lokho okuhlotshaniswa nakho, futhi ngiyaqiniseka ukuthi uma kufanele ngihambe, ngizobhekana nento efanayo uma ngibuyela lapha edolobheni lakithi elithandekayo nelithandekayo ".

Ngakho kungenzeka ukuqedela inhlawulo. Ukwakhiwa kwesihloko esithi "Umuzi Wami" iningi liphela ngezindlela ezahlukene, futhi lokhu kungenye yezinketho ezinhle.

Izincomo

Ekugcineni kufanelekile ukunikeza amathiphu ambalwa ekubhaliseni inhlawulo. Ukubunjwa "Idolobha lami eliwuthandayo" kuzoba lula ukubhala, uma udweba ngaphambili uhlelo olufushane ngamagama angukhiye. Kwesigaba ngasinye esithathiwe - emgqeni. Ukubuka lolu hlelo, ungakhumbula ukuthi yini enye engangifuna ukukusho ekubunjweni. Futhi noma yikuphi ukucabanga okubalulekile ngeke kuphuthelwe.

Ungakhohlwa mayelana nokusetshenziswa kwezindlela zobuciko zokuziveza. Yiqiniso, akudingeki sihambe kakhulu nabo. Uma kungenjalo umbhalo uzothathwa ngokweqile, futhi kunzima kakhulu ukufunda lo mbhalo. Kodwa akufanele kube "indaba" eyomile noma. Ngokuvamile, uma ukhumbule le mithetho eyisisekelo, khona-ke ngomsebenzi ungakwazi ukuphatha ngokushesha kakhulu.